I would just like to address this last point here. As someone who has been doing military RP for the longest time inside and outside of this community, I would generally agree with you. However, you have to remember that this is an RP server first and foremost (as opposed to PVP). Therefore, even if you are soldiers and trying to be professional, doesn't mean you have to be just menacing statues. I find it adds a lot to the immersion of the situation if, say, your commanders RP with some strangers and the soldiers in the background just RP with each other. And it doesn't have to be random chit-chat either. Keeping in contact, making sure all angles are covered, saying you might see something, you know, all those things you just realised you're saying by default in TS? You can say that in game and it would be a lot better. Furthermore, you don't have to speak in order to RP. Emote lighting up a fag, inspecting your gun, rearranging some gear in your backpack, etc, etc. Trust me, I'm speaking from experience here, when you start getting more members (which I hope you do), the silent standing in the background will get tedious and will be offputting. Nobody wants to be an NPC.
Now, I'm not telling you how you should run your parade, but all I am saying here is what I have learned from personal experience.
Otherwise, thread looks good. A few more graphics here and there couldn't hurt, but it's honestly fine the way it is. Good luck with the group and hope to meet you lads IG at some point or another.