Couple of grammatical errors in the lore, pls fix
Actual feedback though, a few others have said a lot so I won't ramble on about it too much but I was hoping for something more. Something that wasn't just CLF but with a bit of r/niceguys mixed in. Hopefully you take the constructive criticism here and instead of throwing your back up, build on it and make this group your own and not just a rebrand. There are endless avenues to go just don't follow the same old formula. @AndreyQhit the nail on the head with his lore and goals feedback. Make some changes with those and this could become a