Link to the source of punishment (report/post): https://www.dayzrp.com/whitelist/summary-17889/
Why the verdict is not fair: it's fair i just need 1 more try to edit my story and make it more match up with the lore
Additional statements/comments explaining your point of view: i rushed too much with my story because i want to play on this server so badly i will spend more time to edit it and make it more matched up with the lore.
What would you like to achieve with this appeal: have 1 more try to pass the whitelist.
What could you have done better?: i should have spend more time to write my story and focus more on the lore and gave a better informations about me.