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Good luck broski.

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Nice to see old groups returning gl.

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Oh boy, it's been a while since I've heard this name... What was it... 2015 I remember this group? Welcome back!

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Now that is a name I havent read in a while - Best of luck with this 🙂 

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Goodluck

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Good luck Batok it will be cool seeing FP around again!

Edited by Jared

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Best of luck with this!

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Nice to see yall returning. Also its Pustoshka not pushtoka 

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12 minutes ago, Ender said:

Nice to see yall returning. Also its Pustoshka not pushtoka 

it is funny because I could have sworn I changed that

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May Mann look favorably upon you.

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Good luck!

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4 hours ago, Batok said:

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Prolly wanna update that, staff might get anal about it and say this thread is WIP.

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2 hours ago, Dusty said:

Prolly wanna update that, staff might get anal about it and say this thread is WIP.

I am about to

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We in dis. Eskettit!

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Interesting to see groups of old lore returning!  I remember this group having some prestige back in the day.

Couple of constructive criticisms:

"at the worst possible timing Jarvis Crimson died of his disease.

Or so it was thought, there never was a body"

How?  Generally when someone "dies of cancer" they are bed ridden and there wouldn't be much of a chance for this to happen.  Unless he wandered off to die alone?  

Maybe have someone run a grammar/spelling check for you as well, as there are quite a few mistakes near the end of the backstory.

Other than that the thread looks good, you guys will give off some spooky vibes on RP.  Good luck!

 

Edited by MR Pussywhipped

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Good luck with this, looks interesting as heck!

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Good luck!

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Best of luck with this old group!

 

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Best of luck guys! Looks interesting.

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Your goals need to be updated to SMART goals. Would also like to set a bit more images on the thread. 

 

Also Kaizer's name is misspelled, but that's me being nit picky. 

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Reading the lore for your group it's more like a guy's story rather a group of people developing into something, I suggest you re-work the group's story.

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