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The Story of Owen "Oak" K.

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Owen AKA "Oak"'s story

STORY:

Owen "Oak" Kabat is a man with a troubled past. He is 28, father of 2, happily married. He was born in the state of CT,USA, in the city of Hartford, a large crime city. He isn't poor, but in the low-mid wealth class. He lives near the "projects", and therefore has seen many things the average Family Guy doesn't normally see. One day, he was almost jumped by a member of a gang. In self defense, he fought back, and killed the man... Being from where he was, the police stereotyped him, and thought he murdered this man for no reason, so he was thrown in jail for 2 and a half years. The reason to the short sentence is his wife, Nina, fought back the law and eventually was able to prove Owen didn't do it. Since then, Owen has lived a steady life, got a good job, moved to a nice neighborhood in Northern State Connecticut, and was happy. In the summer the year after his release, he decided to bring his family to the country of Chernaraus for vacation. They planned on staying for several weeks. He and his family went out to see lots of sites, like the large city of Chernogorsk, and the beautiful fields of the country, going on speedboat rides, helicopter tours, it was the time of his family's life. They were having a blast, but then one day they woke inside the large hotel in Cherno, to see severe warnings on the TV. The infection had begun, and he was confused. His kids were crying, and his wife had a nervous face. The town was in chaos, people freaking out, hectic. His family was hiding in the room the day after, and all was quiet. That night, his door was busted down by some sort of "bandits". They... killed... his wife and kids. Then they took him as a slave to their encampment. After a week of brutal torture he was near death, locked up by the bandit clan. One day, he managed to escape. He still cant remember how. It must have been a miracle. He slowly made his way down to the hotel again, to be greeted by 2 men. He remembers traveling around the large country, hiding as they escorted him. All he can remember was being in the off-road pickup with them, and then the driver was shot straight through the window. He remembers flying off the small hill with the other man, and they crashed into a home. Next thing he knew, he woke up on the beach, with nothing. Now he needs to survive, something of which he'll need help with. He does know one thing though, he will kill any bandit who attempts to mess around with him.

Personality/Who he is

PERSONALITY/WHO HE IS:

Owen is a 28 year old man, not in great shape, but not in horrible. He is a smoker, so going without cigarettes for more than a day really ticks him off, and gives him horrible headaches. He likes to slack off, but when work needs to be done, he pushes to finish. He is an atheist, and respects everyone's religion and beliefs. He is very kind, most of the time that is. For relaxing, he likes to hang with friends from high school, play video games, and share a good laugh with others. He is very skilled in computers, electronics, and computer hardware. He is very nice when meeting new people, makes eye when talking, and smiles a lot. He tends to get angry or upset at times, but always tries to control himself and remain happy. He IS NOT a bandit, and would love to help others surviving in any way possible . He will, however, do whatever it takes to survive. He would negotiate with bandits, but hates them dearly. He would attack them in a second if it came down to that. Overall, he is a good person to be friends with, and one worth keeping.

PLEASE LEMME KNOW IF THIS IS GOOD! I WANNA USE IT FOR THE APPLICATION TOMORROW! THANK YOU!!! FEEL FREE TO GIVE SUGGESTIONS/CRITIQUE !

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I would recommend replacing the he's with an I or me. Imagine the application is YOU RP'ing around a campfire telling the whitelisters your story, you wouldn't say "he lost his kids" you would say "I lost my kids that day".

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I agree with Ethanorg, firstly making it 1st person makes it feel a lot more personal and real. While in the style you have done it, it feels like a news documentary of someone's life.

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