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So glad to have another bunch of Russians! Woo Woo!

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Земля и свобода!

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Roster updates:

@DidgeridooKangaroo, @Saintguy, @PilotBland, @BetterLegion and @PurpleSockzhave been removed from the roster.

With that, we welcome @Sylva, @Nikolai B. and @WolfThePict to the roster.

 

 

edit: fixing tags

 

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So first off the thread is amazing and the lore, as expected of those that made this group, really damned detailed. 

 

I do have  one minor lore concern, by our lore the infected are not dead, so the standing corpses thing isn't accurate, though easily changed to "what appeared to be...', so should be an easy fix. 

 

You also might need to update your SMART goals deadlines, something I admittedly need to do myself since the patch keeps setting my progress back to 0.

 

But everything else looks great, and you have a really strong roster of roleplayers, so wishing you luck.

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2 hours ago, Zanaan said:

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Thanks Zanaan,
The phrase used in your reference is more to show to point of view of the two brothers. Two rural boys that don't have much education that mostly see it how it is. In this circumstance it's focusing more on outlining their view towards the infected rather than be too specific. The pretext of the 'standing corpses' shows this as well: 'Confused and frightened, they drove into Zelenogorsk to be met with hordes of standing corpses.'

As for the SMART goals. Their deadlines could be met as they are currently; although it is cutting it a little close. We've had some recent developments that have made these achievable, you never know what the future holds however. These goals may have to be reviewed if things start going straight down hill.

Cheers for the feedback, if you pick up anything else be sure to send it our way!

 

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No Fiverr recruitment video?

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Thanks for letting me have a go at it lads

Looking good so far.

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The thread looks very good. The lore is well written and I enjoyed reading it. There are 2 minor issues that can be fixed within 10 minutes:

A few times in the lore it just shows a grey bar, is that a mistake or is it on my end? 

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Secondly, there are not that many goals. 1 of the 3 you already completed, the second can be split up in 2 goals though.

@ me when you updated the thread or PM me if you need help with the creation of the goals.

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Goodjob, approved.

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LETS KILL SOME CAPITALISTS 

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Congrats on getting approved boys

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Congrats, lads. 

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16 minutes ago, Jack Rees-Mountbatten said:

Well in Lads!

we miss ya x

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Roster updated for CP, back from holiday - let's get back into it.

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Thanks for the 7.62x39 caliber roleplay today lads.

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taking photos in the middle of a firefight aint smart ?

 

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2 hours ago, Stannis said:

taking photos in the middle of a firefight aint smart ?

 

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why did you think that was a good idea XD  RIP 

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all about those roleplay photos ? 

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4 minutes ago, Stannis said:

all about those roleplay photos ? 

Where did you guys go? I combed the city after a flank and you were all gone.

Today was my day to enter Valhalla and it was robbed of me! 

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