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N-Tox

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So I just 'released' this. I'm lookin for some feedback, since it's the only thing I've really spent some time making.
I'd like some feedback on the way I mastered/edited the vocals on the songs, the lyrics, and the flow/delivery. 

 

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I'm smiling so much, you have a talent if that's you rapping, woah?

Not sure about the chorus though, but the rapping and talking are amazing.

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2 hours ago, Lady In Blue said:

I'm smiling so much, you have a talent if that's you rapping, woah?

Not sure about the chorus though, but the rapping and talking are amazing.

Thank you! The problem I usually have is with choruses, I can never think of anything good. 

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28 minutes ago, N-Tox said:

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You could hum some made up melodies to yourself while doing housework, being at the gym, being at work and see if anything seems catchy enough for a chorus. Then you can start thinking of words to add in! 

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The fuck? This shit is pure fire! Like I thought this was a meme at first but holy shit I was wrong! Dude this is actually really good. Do you make the beats yourself too?

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2 hours ago, DrMax said:

The fuck? This shit is pure fire! Like I thought this was a meme at first but holy shit I was wrong! Dude this is actually really good. Do you make the beats yourself too?

I wish I did, I don't have the keyboards or programs, hell let alone the skills to make beats myself. Thank you! I appreciate it a lot. 

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