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Ryan Shepherd

The Black & Tans [Strict Recruitment]

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Past roleplay experience:

Past roleplay clans (if any):

Why would you like to join The Black & Tans?

What could you add to The Black & Tans as a member?

 

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Well I like how you put this up so good i guess

(The Page)

 

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Calling in @Oisin for his POV and his car bombs.

Interesting concept.

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Struggling to read that font tbh but are you IRA sympathisers calling yourselves the b&ts?

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6 minutes ago, Randle said:

Struggling to read that font tbh but are you IRA sympathisers calling yourselves the b&ts?

hmmmmmm.

I heard car bombs were a hot topic. Inb4 a live grenade is thrown in random backpacks across the map.

In all seriousness, it's an interesting concept.

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lmao, good luck. 

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1 minute ago, Elmo said:

Oh my

Why are IRA men, former or not, okay with the Black & Tans moniker they were given? Any IRA man would spit on that shit, even if they had been cast out. Hell, any Irishman would spit on that if you knew the history. The way you describe your character's upbringing makes it sound like they were raised by staunch nationalists, so why has that seemingly disappeared?

 

It's not just me who noticed then.

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1 minute ago, Randle said:

It's not just me who noticed then.

Ah sure tisn't sure

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3 minutes ago, Elmo said:

Oh my

Why are IRA men, former or not, okay with the Black & Tans moniker they were given? Any IRA man would spit on that shit, even if they had been cast out. Hell, any Irishman would spit on that if you knew the history. The way you describe your character's upbringing makes it sound like they were raised by staunch nationalists, so why has that seemingly disappeared?

Aside from the nonsensical choice of name, the lore is a bit simple too, why hide in Chernarus of all places? It seems like a convenient choice with little explanation as to why they decided to go there, why not go to America, Britain, Scotland, Canada or any one of a dozen other countries where an Irishman with a thick accent and a dodgy past wouldn't raise eyebrows?

Overall the detail in the lore is lacking, it seems like a veneer of Irish nationalism mixed with a low-quality personal story in order to throw up this group page. Not impressive at all, I don't see how this group will be different from any other arms dealing group.

Listen to Elmo please.

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*Rubs head*

Maaaaan... I dunno...

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1 hour ago, Elmo said:

Oh my

Why are IRA men, former or not, okay with the Black & Tans moniker they were given? Any IRA man would spit on that shit, even if they had been cast out. Hell, any Irishman would spit on that if you knew the history. The way you describe your character's upbringing makes it sound like they were raised by staunch nationalists, so why has that seemingly disappeared?

Aside from the nonsensical choice of name, the lore is a bit simple too, why hide in Chernarus of all places? It seems like a convenient choice with little explanation as to why they decided to go there, why not go to America, Britain, Scotland, Canada or any one of a dozen other countries where an Irishman with a thick accent and a dodgy past wouldn't raise eyebrows?

Overall the detail in the lore is lacking, it seems like a veneer of Irish nationalism mixed with a low-quality personal story in order to throw up this group page. Not impressive at all, I don't see how this group will be different from any other arms dealing group.

Listen to this please and sort yourselves out like

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1 hour ago, Elmo said:

Oh my

Why are IRA men, former or not, okay with the Black & Tans moniker they were given? Any IRA man would spit on that shit, even if they had been cast out. Hell, any Irishman would spit on that if you knew the history. The way you describe your character's upbringing makes it sound like they were raised by staunch nationalists, so why has that seemingly disappeared?

Aside from the nonsensical choice of name, the lore is a bit simple too, why hide in Chernarus of all places? It seems like a convenient choice with little explanation as to why they decided to go there, why not go to America, Britain, Scotland, Canada or any one of a dozen other countries where an Irishman with a thick accent and a dodgy past wouldn't raise eyebrows?

Overall the detail in the lore is lacking, it seems like a veneer of Irish nationalism mixed with a low-quality personal story in order to throw up this group page. Not impressive at all, I don't see how this group will be different from any other arms dealing group.

What daddy Elmo said. Good graphics, the other stuff is odd. 

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A lot of sensitive comments about an idea on a make believe server, relax boys.

Anyways, indeed the name might be contradicting to the aspect of IRA in the beginning, again the events of the black & tans happened over 100 years ago, i very much doubt there is a sour taste to those words in anyones mouth who may not be directly effected by the events of 1916.

A name change can be done if the loremasters see fit, as it means nothing only relates to the colours of the uniform.

 

A bit of constructive critisim would be appretiated as the thread has just been posted its still a WiP.

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8 minutes ago, Ryan Shepherd said:

A lot of sensitive comments about an idea on a make believe server, relax boys.

Anyways, indeed the name might be contradicting to the aspect of IRA in the beginning, again the events of the black & tans happened over 100 years ago, i very much doubt there is a sour taste to those words in anyones mouth who may not be directly effected by the events of 1916.

A name change can be done if the loremasters see fit, as it means nothing only relates to the colours of the uniform.

 

A bit of constructive critisim would be appretiated as the thread has just been posted its still a WiP.

To be fair lad constructive criticism was left

2 hours ago, Elmo said:

Aside from the nonsensical choice of name, the lore is a bit simple too, why hide in Chernarus of all places? It seems like a convenient choice with little explanation as to why they decided to go there, why not go to America, Britain, Scotland, Canada or any one of a dozen other countries where an Irishman with a thick accent and a dodgy past wouldn't raise eyebrows?

Overall the detail in the lore is lacking, it seems like a veneer of Irish nationalism mixed with a low-quality personal story in order to throw up this group page. Not impressive at all, I don't see how this group will be different from any other arms dealing group.

Left out the bit about the name but @Elmo has already left solid feedback ^_^ have a wee read

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27 minutes ago, Ryan Shepherd said:

its still a WiP.

I am retarded when it comes to knowing things Irish and all that. I personally don't find too much wrong with the story, and lore. Sure.. its a little weird that you'd come to South Zagoria of all places.. but I ain't too concerned about it cuz like.. It's far away from main civilization.. its plausible so why not. Not sure how to comment on the IRA/Irish jargon cuz.. I don't know 'bout it.

We do not allow WIP's to be posted so this will likely have to be archived until it is a finised product. The only thing I would personally add is some more unique goals. 3+4 seems to be the same thing said differently. What can your group bring to the server that is unique? And bring fun new lore to light?

 

Message a Mod or higher to bring this back to group ideas when you've made it a finished product, ready for a full review. The LM team can help with lore jargon. Any of the irish folks can help with... Irish lore. <3

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Talked to the OP, he changed a bunch o' things. To me this looks alright, good luck on the group mang. Re-opened.

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Good Luck fam!

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Posted the edited version, thanks to @Joffrey for his advice! 

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Would be nice if you could put a text version of the application form so people can not only copy paste it but also read it. :)

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6 minutes ago, Ryan Shepherd said:

Posted the edited version, thanks to @Joffrey for his advice! 

Why did you choose the name Black and Tans? Wouldn't the name Dobermans of been better?

Honestly curious whats going on here.

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9 minutes ago, SweetJoe said:

Why did you choose the name Black and Tans? Wouldn't the name Dobermans of been better?

Honestly curious whats going on here.

 

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6 minutes ago, SweetJoe said:

Why did you choose the name Black and Tans? Wouldn't the name Dobermans of been better?

Honestly curious whats going on here.

Page 14 & 15 explains this.

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9 minutes ago, Ryan Shepherd said:

Page 14 & 15 explains this.

A lacklustre explanation for why IRA men would accept the British based moniker of "Black and Tans." I don't see what's different about this version of the lore, it makes no more sense than the last in my opinion.

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