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Name: Eric Brookes

Occupation: Ex-Cameraman

Height: 6.1

Weight: 14st or 88.9041Kg or 196lb

Eye Colour: Blue

Hair Colour: Brown/Mousy

Build: Average/Overweight

PLB: Telford, England

Bio:-

Eric Brookes is a tall but not mentally strong character. He relies on his wits and intelligence to get him out of sticky situations which boil up slowly as the world gets crazier. Eric has college degree and worked part time at the local news station. He has no military experience and misses his home and the crew which went out with him to Chernarus.

Eric Brookes was a camera man earning a small pay before the pandemic in Chernarus. He was loyal to his T.V company "Channel 1: Direct News" which was a fairly new and low budget company based in the rural town of Telford, England. The news station took a big gamble; It would travel overseas and delve into the subject of the "Chernarus infection". The company sent 2 camera men(one of which was Eric), Jenny Sawyer (A news reader and Eric's girlfriend) and a Audio technician. When they set off, Eric was nervous; he'd heard that the dead had "risen again" like in all the movies which he grew up watching. When they got to Chernarus they only filmed 30 minutes of footage. A very bleak 30 minutes. In a matter of moments; nerves turned to tears as women, children and men scarpered down the blood stricken streets with their oppressors (the so called infected) seeking their flesh from even miles away.

After the sound man was bitten, the rest slowly succumbed to the disease biting at their heels. It was hard Eric, seeing the love of his life being dragged slowly into the abyss with the arms of the death clawing and biting at her gore stripped ankles. They never really talked...only from the moment when she pleaded to be redeemed; redeemed by the gun he had obtained through the mass panic. He fled Chernogorsk. After travelling far and wide he tried to look for groups which might take him in, but he found none. Eric still wanders Chernarus, trying to find a way out of the mess.

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Name: Eric Brookes

Occupation: Ex-Cameraman

Height: 6.1

Weight: 14st or 88.9041Kg or 196lb

Eye Colour: Blue

Hair Colour: Brown/Mousy

Build: Average/Overweight

PLB: Telford, England

Bio:-

Eric Brookes is a tall but not mentally strong character. He relies on his wits and intelligence to get him out of sticky situations which boil up slowly as the world gets crazier. Eric has a college degree and worked part time at the local news station. He has no military experience and misses his home and the crew which went out with him to Chernarus.

Eric Brookes was a camera man earning a small pay before the pandemic in Chernarus. He was loyal to his T.V company "Channel 1: Direct News" which was a fairly new and low budget company based in the rural town of Telford, England. The news station took a big gamble; it would travel overseas and delve into the subject of the "Chernarus infection". The company sent 2 camera men (one of which was Eric), Jenny Sawyer (a news reader and Eric's girlfriend) and a Audio technician. When they set off, Eric was nervous; he'd heard that the dead had "risen again" like in all the movies which he grew up watching. When they got to Chernarus they only filmed 30 minutes of footage. A very bleak 30 minutes. In a matter of moments; nerves turned to tears as women, children and men scarpered down the blood stricken streets with their oppressors (the so called infected) seeking their flesh from even miles away.

After the sound man was bitten, the rest slowly succumbed to the disease biting at their heels. It was hard for Eric, seeing the love of his life being dragged slowly into the abyss with the arms of the death clawing and biting at her gore stripped ankles. They never really talked... only from the moment when she pleaded to be redeemed; redeemed by the gun he had obtained through the mass panic. He fled Chernogorsk. After travelling far and wide he tried to look for groups which might take him in, but he found none. Eric still wanders Chernarus, trying to find a way out of the mess.

Not bad! I'd like to read more about what happened between your arrival and the death of your crew. You're talking about "women, children and men" as if you had a lot of company, but earlier you said that only your girlfriend and the sound man went with you.

In the second paragraph you state that "the rest slowly succumbed". Again, who else was with you besides the sound man and your girlfriend? "The rest" as you state it now refers to only your girlfriend and maybe yourself.

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Ah, Sorry, I was referring to the population of chernogorsk. All the men woman and children running from the infected.

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