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Eddie P. Castle

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Before the outbreak, Eddie Paquin Castle was an All-American Lacrosse player who played for a college team called the PC Friars (Providence College Friars). Eddie and his team were in a tournament, and played against the Moscow Rebels. After the game ended with a 12-10 ending score, the PC Frairs had won the game. After all the hard work, the team traveled to Chernarus for a hotel and celebration with drinks and happiness. As they traveled to Chernarus they'd been hearing crowds and yelling on there bus ride to the area. Eddie believed it was because of the loss of the team and didn't think much of it, but him and the team later find out that's not the case. Gunshots and screams can be heard from outside the coach bus and people running at the bus slamming themselves into it. These people did not look healthy, nor friendly. After all....the zombie apocalypses isn't supposed to end in happy thoughts. After the insane monsters attack his bus, Eddie and one of his friends are the only ones to survive the bus attack, but his friend is wounded badly. Eddie helps his friend towards a sheltered home as gunfire and bodies are being shot through the air. Eddie notices his friend beginning to turn pale and have a sickly glare in his eyes. Eddie tries to help his friend by applying press on his bite wound, but there's no use stopping the blood. Eddies friend starts to get seizures and frantically jolting around on the floor. He looks at him with fear as his friend gets up from the ground with a slanted head and runs at Eddie. He'd push his friend back and look at him with a nervous tone and grab the nearest object by him. The object would be a piece of broken glass which would scar his hand from gripping the makeshift blade. What was Eddies friend had became something evil and wanted him dead. The monster would sprint at him with force and knock him to the ground. As the both fall the shard of glass would engulf it's self into the monsters eye and would kill it instantly. Eddie lies down insanity and loses his mind after this turn of events. He now believes anyone who gets harmed from an infected person should be killed or held in captivity for a hour to see if they'd turn. Eddie doesn't trust anyone at all unless you are checked with clear and a brisk search to see if you're bitten or wounded.

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Unique. Haven't heard anyone use a sports team traveling to compete as their background story before.

You should keep writing on your story, Eddie. I challenge you to try and start fewer sentences with "Eddie" and also to maybe add a headline to make the thread look better? Hoping to see more.

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Unique. Haven't heard anyone use a sports team traveling to compete as their background story before.

You should keep writing on your story, Eddie. I challenge you to try and start fewer sentences with "Eddie" and also to maybe add a headline to make the thread look better? Hoping to see more.

Thank you, this was just a simple rough draft of "Eddie P. Castle". I'm hoping to add more of a unique and detailed back story on him. Thank you for the feedback.

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