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Starkiller

Zachary Daly Nelson

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An average 16 year old boy that is somewhat sarcastic and likes to make people laugh. He came all the way from America to see his relatives. Zach, his mother, father, and younger sister were going to stay for 3 weeks like they do every year when the weather is good. They were all happy to see each other. After a few days of getting there the stories and rumors of a crazy man biting someone was spreading around, but they thought nothing of it at first. It has been almost a week and a half of their stay, and more sick and crazy people keep showing up out of nowhere. The family still don't really think anything of it they just thought it was some kind of flu. Almost 5 days later he knew it was to later to go home when the soldiers came, and the gunshots were heard constantly. Zach and his family were not able to sleep at night. Around 5 more days later they were forced to leave their homes and go find a new camp. On their way to a new town bandits stopped them and was robbing them for all they've got. The uncle pulls a gun on the robbers and a small firefight erupts. At the end almost all the family was killed and all that was left was Zach his uncle and his father. They mourned the entire way they walked west. About 8 hours of nonstop walking they realized they were lost. They decided to make camp in to woods for one night then move on. Around 2 AM one of the infected came and attacked Zach's father. His uncle not knowing of what's going on runs away in the forest leaving Zach and his father. Zach seeing his father being eaten he takes whatever gear he can grab around him, and runs as fast as he can. By Himself not knowing what to do now and no longer having any family. Zach goes through the ruins hoping to find a weapon or food, and trying to stay away from the dead, and people. After weeks of being by himself and being robbed 3 times and almost killed by more dead then you can count. He will not give up on survival.

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Pretty crazy story all in one, Honestly pretty good but describe a little more. Like add more emotion to it and just have fun with it. 

(All this stuff you don't have to do I am not the best writer myself but yea have fun! Looking forward to seeing more of your writings and more about your character)

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Keira    1039

Hope to read more about Zach and get to know him IG better! Seems like a good kid.

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