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Train Hopper Joe.

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APureGamer    55

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Joe smiled as he remembered about his adventures from three years ago.When he awoke from his stupor he smiled as the sound was familiar. Footsteps and yelling swept across the train cart and quickly vanished. Joe threw on his backpack and opened up the train cart door. With a ear piercing screech the train door slid open.

As Joe looked down he could see over the cliff that was beneath him. His glasses barely staying on as he searched for a ladder connected to the train cart.

Finally finding one he grabbed it and with all his strength lifted himself up, Climbing up the train cart he looked down nervously. When Joe reached the top he stopped and adjusted his glasses and looked ahead.

"That better be Paul and Emma, I swear to god you crazy son of a bi-" before he could finish the train cart lunged forward as the emergency brake was pulled.

"The jig is up" Joe yelled as he sprinted with all his energy to the front of the train. As he caught up with his friends he laughed. as the train passed through a tunnel and to flat ground. The echos of their laughter bouncing throughout the tunnel.

"You crazy son of a guns, what you do this time? As Paul a tall, skinny, american man opened his bag, revealing jewelry filled with diamonds and gold. Emma a short, blonde, Irish women jumped with joy as they all hysterically laughed, but celebrating too soon they heard multiple voices yell

"Hey- you three! Stop right now, Texas police!”

Without hesitation the three ran to the front of the train, Laughing and jumping hysterically with joy as shotgun pellets flew past. Joe turned around and made his hand into a gun yelling "BANG! BANG!" as the three jumped off the train tumbling onto the grass below.

As the three of them sat up and watched as the train flew past. They waved at the officers on top of the train carts, fighting to keep their balance. Joe took in a deep breath as they all followed the train tracks to their next adventure.

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A good read! It was a nice change of pace and very well written. Good job!

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APureGamer    55

A good read! It was a nice change of pace and very well written. Good job!

I had some help from friends to make this read alot better. Hope you take the time to re-read it! and Thanks.

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Very good read.

I felt like this was 2 separate stories put together? Maybe extend this as the story changes from an emotional scene to a tense action scene.

Overall great story would love to read more. :)

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Ramon    331

Nice written and fun to read ;)

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zoyo    64

Good job with this, I don't think I've ever seen a character like this. Cant wait to see more! :)

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APureGamer    55

Thanks everyone, There will be more memories to come. But i am thinking of shelving Joe right now due to the fact i had a great idea for a new character but the memories will continue.

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Great story man, keep it up!

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iparodyall    15

Johhny Jones remembered a similar story

Broke on the news back in laredo TX

He laughed and yelled "those lucky sumbitches"

Things were better then.

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