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Ender's lost journal -nolonger updating-


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Inspiration by Aurora Sky Click her name to check out her story/dairy

Sidenote: Its kinda dull right now cause this is the first page my character has wrote so hes a little rusty at this but he'll get better in time

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There's a couple of spelling errors, is it intentional?

But regardless, it's an easy read(as the background is white, and my eye's arn't strained to stare at a black background, thank you good sir), and I hope it goes interesting places.

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I enjoyed this :D

Some notes for improvement:

As mentioned "unless it's intentional" there are some spelling mistakes (use word to auto correct if unsure). I would also add some punctuation. It's hard to tell where a phrase ends and starts. And paragraphs as well would make these look better and make it easier to read.

Keep em coming :D

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thanks for the info guys i'll post up another one and hopefully better once my character has something to write about

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I enjoyed this :D

Some notes for improvement:

As mentioned "unless it's intentional" there are some spelling mistakes (use word to auto correct if unsure). I would also add some punctuation. It's hard to tell where a phrase ends and starts. And paragraphs as well would make these look better and make it easier to read.

Keep em coming :D

Roach you think you could lend me the template you used for your journal? I might seriously start one. So yeah...

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I enjoyed this :D

Some notes for improvement:

As mentioned "unless it's intentional" there are some spelling mistakes (use word to auto correct if unsure). I would also add some punctuation. It's hard to tell where a phrase ends and starts. And paragraphs as well would make these look better and make it easier to read.

Keep em coming :D

Roach you think you could lend me the template you used for your journal? I might seriously start one. So yeah...

Sure I'll PM you :)

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really like the idea of the notebook style.

Hope to hear more about Ender soon!

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Love it and look forward to reading more about Ender. Also thanks for the shout-out!

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I want to do something similar, as far as the format. Thanks for being the guinea pig, Ender. :P

Good reading, though. Amy's much in the same state of mind when it comes to friends. <3

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I want to do something similar, as far as the format. Thanks for being the guinea pig, Ender. :P

Good reading, though. Amy's much in the same state of mind when it comes to friends. <3

You're welcome and i look forward to seeing your format


i just wish i could find a font that looks like hand writing the font im using is nice but it looks to good doesnt look like hand writing

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I want to do something similar, as far as the format. Thanks for being the guinea pig, Ender. :P

Good reading, though. Amy's much in the same state of mind when it comes to friends. <3

You're welcome and i look forward to seeing your format


i just wish i could find a font that looks like hand writing the font im using is nice but it looks to good doesnt look like hand writing

I know what you mean. Try 1001 Fonts, if you haven't already. :)

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I want to do something similar, as far as the format. Thanks for being the guinea pig, Ender. :P

Good reading, though. Amy's much in the same state of mind when it comes to friends. <3

You're welcome and i look forward to seeing your format


i just wish i could find a font that looks like hand writing the font im using is nice but it looks to good doesnt look like hand writing

You can find cool and free fonts here: http://dafont.com

Just download one you like, drag and drop in in the "Font" folder (Control Panel).

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I want to do something similar, as far as the format. Thanks for being the guinea pig, Ender. :P

Good reading, though. Amy's much in the same state of mind when it comes to friends. <3

You're welcome and i look forward to seeing your format


i just wish i could find a font that looks like hand writing the font im using is nice but it looks to good doesnt look like hand writing

You can find cool and free fonts here: http://dafont.com

Just download one you like, drag and drop in in the "Font" folder (Control Panel).

Thanks i got 2 fonts now that im going to try out lets see how it looks in the next page

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Short, but heart-felt. I like. :P

Poor 'Rora.

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Fucking ETHAN!

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Fucking ETHAN!

ETHAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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