Character Crictism and feedback.

[Ironicman 7]

This topic is mainly about Asking about Crictism and feedback upon ouu character from people who have experience with your character so you know what to improve upon and what people like about your character for further self defeloping for Roleplay improvement.

In this topic you can ask people of what they think of your character by giving a little presentation about him not in form of background and all but reconition so people can reconise it and remember the times he/she had witht he character to give feedback upon it!

I'll start a bit

Character name: Rynder jagersma

Nicknames: Gentle Joe, Rainder, Rain

Attitude: layd back,Relaxing,Country,Verry honest and kind

Voice: slow,soothing,Country accent, little broken english (example:http://vocaroo.com/i/s0l0AsCvmEv7)

Clan relations: ex-Lietenant of 501st

Skin: Mercernary in the 501st and always Woodlander outside the clan

What i mostly got in my hands: Double barrel/Hatchet/M1014

Locations: berizino,Novy sobor,Stary sobor,Altar castle

If you dont reconise the character then you can just post yours and see if someone reconises it and could give you feedback or critiscm

[armouredwaffle 0]

Not trying to be a dick here, but is that a typo spelling of 'character' throughout the thread or does it have another meaning? You wrote Charrachter, which acording to Google Chrome's spell check, isn't a real word.

Sorry to be a grammar freak, but it confused me.

[Ironicman 7]

Not trying to be a dick here, but is that a typo spelling of 'character' throughout the thread or does it have another meaning? You wrote Charrachter, which acording to Google Chrome's spell check, isn't a real word.

Sorry to be a grammar freak, but it confused me.

Fixed

[Mr Bobby 0]

Don't think I've ever met your character but from what I've read here he sounds really good

I will look out for you

[Ironicman 7]

Don't think I've ever met your character but from what I've read here he sounds really good

I will look out for you

well why not post yours here too and see if someone reconises him for some feedback

[Mr Bobby 0]

Character name: Scott Rutherford

Attitude: Honest, Sort of a pacifist, won't take crap.

Voice: Scottish(example:http://vocaroo.com/i/s0l0AsCvmEv7)

Clan relations: None

Skin: Merc 3, Wears a green beanie thing and has a stubble.

What i mostly got in my hands: L85 (I think the gun is?) Machete

Locations: Stary sobor,Altar castle

[Traveller 0]

No idea who the guy above me is. Sounds good though mate, I'll hopefully see you out there.

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Character name: The Reverend Felix Kaine

Nicknames: Reverend

Attitude: Quiet, on edge

Voice: Prim, proper, soft

Clan relations: None

Skin: Civilian 11

What I usually have in my hands: Nothing

Locations: Altar Castle, Lake Prud, Pustoshka Church, Desal Plant