NEW BACKSTORY - ONLY SERIOUS REPLIES PLEASE

[Hez]

Hey everyone, I was inspired buy all the new characters in the character page and wanted to write my own!! Please give me some feedback 

Spoiler

 

BACKSTORY

 

Jake ‘Ace of Spades’ Whitman is an Ex-Navy SEAL of the Black Dingo Trident Squad; a group so secretive that only the President of the USA knew of its existence. It was Jakes’ experience within Black Dingo Trident Squad that landed him as official bodyguard for the President's Daughter. In order to fulfill his duties as bodyguard, the President paid for an extensive operation on Jake, where a depleted uranium shell was placed under his skin. This makes Jake completely impervious to stab wounds, broken bones, bullets and other forms of physical trauma.

 

After Airforce 1 was hijacked by terrorists, Jake single handedly was able to fight his way to the cockpit and kill all the terrorists by opening all of the planes airlocks and venting the terrorists into the sea. Sadly, this also depressurised the whole plane and caused it to crash into the Chernogorsk International Hotel, killing the president and the majority of his staff. In his dying breaths, the President made Jake swear to look after his daughter. After many nights alone, Jake and the President's daughter made the long and arduous trek up to North West Airfield, in hopes of finding the secret stash of an Boeing AH-64 Apache attack helicopter and using it to blow up the Russian blockade of the country and escape. On the way in Kabanino, the duo was set upon by a large group of men, hoping to kill Jake and take his M4. Jake was able to use the secret fighting technique of the Black Dingo Trident Squad and killed all 23 men using only a can opener. In the fighting, the president's daughter had been bit by a zombie, quickly becoming infected. Jake quickly sucked out the infection using his mouth, but sadly the president’s daughter died of blood loss. Failing his mission, Jake promised himself that he would take vengeance on those responsible 

 

IC GOALS

Kill everyone in Chernarus

 

@Brayces @Stagsview @Franny only serious feedback please non-serious will be repported to role

[Runzig]

You should be a loremaster mate

[Stradic]

Only thing that could have made this story better would have been Jake was a politician at some point. 

[TheBishop]

 

 

*Jack Leaping off the top of the tower to find the President’s daughter...*

Edited June 1, 2020 by FireDude

[Brayces]

And you think it's a meme but people do really write BGs like this.

[TheBishop]

25 minutes ago, Brayces said:

And you think it's a meme but people do really write BGs like this.

I’m so sorry. At least I haven’t noticed too many super soldiers recently. 

[Connvexus]

You forgot to add you're also Johnny Sins' brother and you've had an operation to be able to see in the dark which they call Gamma Vision.

Edited May 23, 2022 by Connvexus

[Guest Generic Name]

Sadly, not even that far from actual character pages. α/10 would read again.

[cheeks]

On 6/1/2020 at 11:29 AM, Hez said:

Jake was able to use the secret fighting technique of the Black Dingo Trident Squad and killed all 23 men using only a can opener.

We all know where this came from lmao. Good one, have my beans.

Seems like there's not only can opener bandits but also can opener (supersoldier)heroes.

[RatRider]

[Humanitas_]

Can't wait to meet you in game. Top notch writing 

[vanon02]

On 6/1/2020 at 5:29 AM, Hez said:

After Jake was able to use the secret fighting technique of the Black Dingo Trident Squad and killed all 23 men using only a can opener. 

 

[SovietPj]

This was actually entertaining to read i hope to find you in game  A plus