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Del Toro's Cartel [ IC RECRUITMENT ]


YAKMOUTH

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  • Titanium

nice to see u finally put up a gp! gl out there 

heard good things about this group.

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  • Emerald

Looks really interesting. My character has bumped into you guys quite a few times. Good luck going official! 

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  • Sapphire

The group page looks good, really like the graphics!

Only had good RP meeting this group. Good luck with approval!

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  • Diamond

Where was this in Chernarus!? Finally! Look forward to your RP guys! Good luck! 

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  • Titanium

Shame Sung Ho is dead, he could've been the cook he promised Hector he would be.

All good though, best of luck boys!

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Finding a simple weed farm in the forest was a funny experience (tho I know it didn't belong to you), so I can't wait to go through a maze that the biggest weed farm will be. See you out there!

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  • Sapphire

Thats a nice group you got there ? But maybe its a good idea to look for more goals that arent achieved yet to provide more long term efforts. 

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  • Legend

Very colourful group page. Good luck to you all.

Just one possible change to help you guys and that would be to make the group goals completion dates go by the days after outbreak so it’s easier to track.

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  • Titanium

I really like the text and graphics altogether. About weed farm i'm curious ? I wish you and your friends good luck !

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Another group that has long lingered as dynamic finally decided to go official ! 

pablo escobar narcos GIF

Now on to some feedback. 

  • The name of your group doesn't make sense grammar wise, you should name it either "Del Toro's Cartel" or "The Del Toro Cartel" (I know I am picky with this, but I hope you find this relevant);
  • Your graphics are underwhelming, you should invest into having some proper graphics so it could look better;
  • Objectives, if you have any completed objectives, move them to another header and only keep the ones you are working on;
  • Member showcase: space them out better and perhaps you should add some short stories of what they did and how they are working inside the cartel. Your cartel is primarily shown as a family, so it would nice to know even more about everyone who is part of it.

Other than that, your backstory is nice and the objectives that are still undergoing are good and reflect on what you are currently doing in Livonia.

Good luck and I hope to meet you again ?

 

 

 

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  • MVP

Best of luck with this guys, I would definitely get some graphics that pop out at you and some that would fit the group page better, some that may have transparent backgrounds. The goals seem ok but I would add more and set the achievable completion date to outbreak days as said in an earlier post by Voodoo.  Other that that the Roster and lore looks great and I can't wait to see what this group brings to Livonia. 

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  • Diamond

Good looking group! My underlying OCD is really going off with that member showcase tho. Other than that, excited to see what is going to come from you guys being official! Good luck!

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  • Media Team

Damn i thought this was posted way back guess not. 

Looks good boys good luck 

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  • Diamond

have met you lads a few times, great rp.

goodluck.

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  • Sapphire

Glad to see this about time @YAKMOUTH. Can't wait to bump into you boys again. Everything looks good to me and I wish you the best of luck with this group ? 

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  • Emerald

Enjoyed the RP with your boys so far! Please don't make my drug addict relapse XD

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Looking good! Not met you guys in any official capacity yet, but let's say we have a few mutual friends. As I said with on the group page of Brass, this should really bring an interesting dynamic to Livonia. Only thing I can suggest is, as others have mentioned, grammar in the title. The Del Toro Cartel, or Del Toro's Cartel, would read better. 

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  • Emerald

Encountered this group in different forms, multiple times in the past.

Dont think i've ever had a negative experience with anyone on this roste... Wait a minute, is that @kranen? Okay maybe there was one negative experience, but i dont count it. Too much good RP followed.

Regardless I shall be looking forward to setting up that Nirvana deal once the lore narrative starts back up again ? 

 

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35 minutes ago, Wulf said:

Encountered this group in different forms, multiple times in the past.

Dont think i've ever had a negative experience with anyone on this roste... Wait a minute, is that @kranen? Okay maybe there was one negative experience, but i dont count it. Too much good RP followed.

Regardless I shall be looking forward to setting up that Nirvana deal once the lore narrative starts back up again ? 

 

Imagine being a nouche, sad.

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  • Diamond

@YAKMOUTH you know i already love the RP you buys bring you had my vote long ago good luck ❤️

 

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