Wolfpack Livonia Prefab - Community Discussion

[Nyx]

Refer to all information here: 

 

We welcome all feedback!

[Ducky]

Lose the quarantine tent and you're golden.

Some of the other placements are also a little iffy, like the wheels/foundation of some of the buildings clipping pretty far into the ground, but my quarrel is mostly with the quarantine tent, if you just got rid of that and placed a nice tree with a bench under it, I feel it would be better.

 

Overall good though, looking forward to seeing it.

 

Oh and before I forget, those red desks under the camo net are also sticking out like crazy, maybe re-approach that addition and try to find something else to use?

[Nyx]

1 minute ago, Ducky said:

Lose the quarantine tent and you're golden.

Some of the other placements are also a little iffy, like the wheels/foundation of some of the buildings clipping pretty far into the ground, but my quarrel is mostly with the quarantine tent, if you just got rid of that and placed a nice tree with a bench under it, I feel it would be better.

 

Overall good though, looking forward to seeing it.

 

Oh and before I forget, those red desks under the camo net are also sticking out like crazy, maybe re-approach that addition and try to find something else to use?

We wanted a medical area, but I might be able to throw up some more of the slum tents and make it look a little not so out of place! As for the red desks, definitely see where youre coming from and ive been debating changing it to just tables. Definitely will revisit that tent though! Thanks for the feedback

[GaryCash]

I like it a lot I think it looks great;

41 minutes ago, Ducky said:

Lose the quarantine tent and you're golden.

Some of the other placements are also a little iffy, like the wheels/foundation of some of the buildings clipping pretty far into the ground, but my quarrel is mostly with the quarantine tent, if you just got rid of that and placed a nice tree with a bench under it, I feel it would be better.

 

Overall good though, looking forward to seeing it.

 

Oh and before I forget, those red desks under the camo net are also sticking out like crazy, maybe re-approach that addition and try to find something else to use?

I disagree maybe it was left their by the previous inhabitants? Could be there from the start of the infection, maybe no one wants to touch it for fear of disease, or maybe they’ve repurposed it, who knows

[Eddie]

I think this looks great but I have to agree with Ducky on the red desk, they definitely look out of place. Other than that, this looks like a good place to generate some trading posts and an RP hub. Best of luck with this!

[neom]

I like it and props for putting it out there for the community to talk about. 

Maybe the only thing I would change is where the train crash is add a bit more stuff to make it look and feel like a derailment. 
Other then that I like it and happy to see it added  

[Queerios]

Going from Fort Knox to this, what an improvement, colour me impressed lads. Also, like neom said, props to you for opening this up to the community to discuss. 

The only feedback I have is maybe move the overturned trains away from one another, having them in that 'V' shape looks kinda goofy to me, but that's subjective. 

Maybe now we can stop meme'ing on @RiZ :^)

[Ryan Shepherd]

Honestly hats off to you this time @PhoenyxxRP, what an improvement from fort knox orientated by gear and defence (from my opinion) to an actual realistic community style prefab.

This is exactly the way I want prefabs to be. The only thing I would remove or move is the yellow tent but thats being picky.

All in all great base this time around, well done @PhoenyxxRP, I can finally stop bullying @RiZ about prefabs.

Edited February 29, 2020 by Ryan Shepherd

[Ron]

I'd say a very nice improvement immersion-wise. I like that it looks like a little village.

Things I'd change:

• The yellow tent - doesn't fit at all , maybe a hut with some medical shit in it does the job, like in the soup kitchen , for example.
• The brown log house right next to the yellow tent is not connected to the dirt road , all other houses seem to be. 
• The train being placed like that looks unrealistic. Maybe try one wagon on the rails and one next to it, laying on its side still touching the rails.
• The caravan / wagon thing on the side ... I don't know. It looks weird to me. If there was people living in that area - would they not try and lift it to onto its wheel again to probably use it?

[Mellstrom]

Honestly, the only thing that looks out of place is the yellow tent, looks superb otherwise. Some more greenery could be nice as well but im guessing you have already used the max amount of objects.

[Nyx]

New prefab design is up from the feedback as well as a location move which is stated in the prefab application. Still welcoming all feedback.

Edited March 31, 2020 by PhoenyxxRP

[Player 1]

To be honest, the layout looks fine and very organized. But in all honesty, it looks so out of place. Like it was built week ago. It's not immersion breaking as a whole but... it just doesn't sit right with me. I'm not sure how else to explain what I mean. I want to like it but, I just can't. 

[boring]

i think you should port cherno square into livonia and have it in some random field. would be better

// joking

on a real, it looks good. nice little hamlet. simplistic yet realistic at the same time. good luck!