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Hector Jeferson
Character information
  1. Alias
    Hex
  2. Mental
    Intelligent
  3. Morale
    Get job done but prefer humain ways
  4. Date of birth
    1978-10-01 (41 years old)
  5. Place of birth
    New York
  6. Nationality
    American
  7. Ethnicity
    White
  8. Languages
    American (US)
  9. Relationship
    Jack
  10. Family
    Brother
  11. Religion
    Atheist

Description

  1. Height
    187 cm
  2. Weight
    94 kg
  3. Build
    Mesomorph: large bone structure, large muscles and a naturally athletic physique
  4. Hair
    Potatoe brown, short
  5. Eyes
    grey
  6. Features
    Loyal, adventurous, reliable, cooperative, unmerciful and unforgiving toward traitors and evil people
  7. Equipment
    Night vision goggles, light backpack, few cans of food and drink, military knife, machine gun, pistol, lighter and cigar, black boots, black pants, military shirt + vest, black hat and mask, basic first aid kit.
  8. Occupation
    Former SWAT member
  9. Affiliation
    No affiliation
  10. Role
    No role

Background

During events Hector Jefferson as American SEAL team member volunteered to join NATO forces. He got assignment to NATO fleet into covert operations team called "Black Dagger".
"Black Dagger" got many secret assignments(Mostly their priority was to gather intel and evidence about Russia part of probable mass murderers, acts against human rights and war crimes). During operation called "Sleep Well" things got out of control because of infiltrated Russian spy gave to mission target firsthand warning about soon approaching "Black Dagger" team. The ambush was not very effective, but still succeeded shooting down "Black Dagger" team helicopter and force it crashlanding. Luck was on ambushers side, because chopter got attacked by swarm of infected civilians at the crash site. Three members survived that attack but two of them got bitten during fight and started soon show out infected subjects pattern. There was no other way than shoot them. One night Mr Jefferson had to run from infected civillians because all ammo from weapons was depleted. Accidentally he hit his head severly against branch of tree that caused head trauma. The head trauma caused loss of memory about how he got here and where is this "here" at all. Mr Jefferson recalls only that his brother Jack might also be alive somewhere around and is hoping to find him.

1 Comment


Kain

Posted

Hi, Nophaie! I'm the community's friendly neighborhood lore whore and if they ever decide to make loremaster a thing again, that as well! 

 

So, I had a look through your profile and backstory and I had a few discrepancies in your story that I wanted to clear up with you and then possibly help suggest a way to make it work with the lore. Before I continue, I would like to say that if you do need help with your story, feel free to message me on the forums or on the community teamspeak. 

So, the first and largest issue I've gathered from your backstory comes from your character being in the Federal Bureau of Investigation, Special Weapons and Tactics. While I have zero problem with your character being SWAT in itself, it's more about how your character ended up in South Zagoria as said SWAT operator. So, the reason why I gave the full name of the American FBI SWAT is because how important it is in the case of your character going on an operation. So, the FBI SWAT would have nothing to do with the NATO insurgency in Chernarus. The reason this would be is that NATO is a military alliance, not an emergency response alliance. Therefore, the people that would be sent on International operations in regards to the NATO insurgency would be any that fall under a military branch: air force, navy, army, marines, delta, seal team 6, and the branches go on. Additionally, SWAT teams would never get themselves involved with operations outside of the USA, it's just not their jurisdiction. 

My suggestion for you to fix that issue is to research into branches that fall under the United States Department of Defense and figure out which ones are considered a (1) military unit and (2) operate internationally, then (3) ask yourself if it really makes sense considering that units jurisdiction. Once you have those three checked off, make you sure do the research into how you get in and other minor details.

The other issue I saw was that you were referring to Russia a lot in this, are you getting Russia confused with Chernarus? Chernarus is the country that borders south Russia near Tuapse. Just make sure to clarify that. 

Besides that, I feel like you could be on your way to make a great character, just make sure to know that research will always end up paying off one way or another. Like I said earlier, if you feel the need to have more help, don't be afraid to message me on the forums or in Teampseak.

Goodluck and have fun roleplaying!

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