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Church Jackson
Character information
  1. Alias
    C.J
  2. Mental
    Stable
  3. Morale
    Help people in need, follow through with the UN's orders, and Restore The United Nations' reputation.
  4. Date of birth
    1994-06-03 (24 years old)
  5. Place of birth
    Alabama, United States
  6. Nationality
    American
  7. Ethnicity
    White-Caucasian
  8. Languages
    English, some Spanish
  9. Relationship
    None
  10. Family
    Unknown
  11. Religion
    Baptist Christian

Description

  1. Height
    178 cm
  2. Weight
    81 kg
  3. Build
    tall and mostly muscles
  4. Hair
    short brown hair
  5. Eyes
    Brown
  6. Alignment
    Lawful Good
  7. Features
    He's determined to help others no matter the cost. Has a scar on his left arm, lion attack in South Africa.
  8. Equipment
    UN Military gear, Cross Necklace, United Nations ID, Custom UN Dog tags.
  9. Occupation
    United Nations, Staff Sergeant
  10. Affiliation
    United Nations
  11. Role
    2nd in command of the 3rd deployment in South Zagoria.

Background

Church Jackson, throughout all of grade school, was determined to help people. After Church finished High school, he went to join the United States Army, but he later found out that he wanted to be a keeper of the peace. He was shipped to Africa to help against local terrorist factions. Church had a "Great" time in Africa, He made a friend with another UN member named Drake Somali. Drake was African, and he enjoyed helping the citizen by giving them food and supplies. Church was depressed since he didn't get to see his girlfriend much, but the local children's smiles helped make him feel better on the inside. One day their village, name Stowie, was attacked by a local terrorist organization named Zewbi. Their intentions weren't getting the food, they were there because they wanted blood. The terrorist group pulled in the camp and started firing their rounds off and yelling for the Troops to come out. The UN troops were outnumbered 2 to 1. The UN troops were scared, eventually, a new guy and 15 others were sent out to negotiate. Church was one of those people to be sent outside. There were only 22 troops there and the rebels had 44. Half the troops were sent out early for a scouting mission for a new checkpoint. Church was sent to negotiate. After a while, the terrorist got bored and impatient, so they decided to shoot. The Zewbi killed 9 of their troops before they could run to cover, buying time for the reinforcements was no longer an option. By this time 22 UN troops were about 10 mins out from the Checkpoint. Church decided to stall them again, and he succeeded this time, He told the terrorist to lay down their weapons, so the terrorist would stop, but they laughed at him. by this time church was the only one left outside. The terrorist finally reached him behind a building, but little did they know he was on a .50 cal waiting for them. He sprayed down all the terrorist, and somehow managed to kill them all. After about 2 minutes later the reinforcements pulled up and church explained what happened. The Colonel decided to give Church a promotion from Sergeant to Staff Sergeant.
He was later restationed over into a new Platoon in South Zagoria half a year later, after, His colonel figured South Africa no longer needed his help. His mission is to Recover any lost UN members, to restore the UN's name, and bring back Peace to the Region.

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California

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Church a promotion from corporal to Lt. First class

Not to be a nit picky cunt, but being a 24 year old lieutenant would be more likely under the consolation of going through a ROTC or officers program through college and being a commissioned officer right off the bat.

 

I'd rewrite the lore of your character a wee bit, to become an officer in most any modern military, a 4 year degree, officer training courses, and several years of enlisted experience is typical before considering any enlisted serviceman to become a commisioned officer, whereas going to an academy, or doing ROTC type shit in college will give a lot of young blokes their butter bars. Perhaps let him be an inexperienced lieutenant left with a shit job to do(South Zagoria)? Or make him a bit older?

 

Just looking out for ya bud. Someone will ask ingame, and give you shit for a story written like this if its ever told.

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8 hours ago, California said:

Not to be a nit picky cunt, but being a 24 year old lieutenant would be more likely under the consolation of going through a ROTC or officers program through college and being a commissioned officer right off the bat.

 

I'd rewrite the lore of your character a wee bit, to become an officer in most any modern military, a 4 year degree, officer training courses, and several years of enlisted experience is typical before considering any enlisted serviceman to become a commisioned officer, whereas going to an academy, or doing ROTC type shit in college will give a lot of young blokes their butter bars. Perhaps let him be an inexperienced lieutenant left with a shit job to do(South Zagoria)? Or make him a bit older?

 

Just looking out for ya bud. Someone will ask ingame, and give you shit for a story written like this if its ever told.

I'm gonna change My rank and yes I know it sounds dumb as hell

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19 hours ago, California said:

Not to be a nit picky cunt, but being a 24 year old lieutenant would be more likely under the consolation of going through a ROTC or officers program through college and being a commissioned officer right off the bat.

 

I'd rewrite the lore of your character a wee bit, to become an officer in most any modern military, a 4 year degree, officer training courses, and several years of enlisted experience is typical before considering any enlisted serviceman to become a commisioned officer, whereas going to an academy, or doing ROTC type shit in college will give a lot of young blokes their butter bars. Perhaps let him be an inexperienced lieutenant left with a shit job to do(South Zagoria)? Or make him a bit older?

 

Just looking out for ya bud. Someone will ask ingame, and give you shit for a story written like this if its ever told.

There I fixed it. Since I will not be leading the group I will be a staff sergeant.

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